Friday, October 2, 2009

Lost Locker

“Where is my locker?!” “Wasn’t it here an hour ago?” As I walked into C Hall I was ready to go to my locker, get my books, and head to my third hour class. I could see a row of lockers and walked closer but I noticed these numbers were nowhere near mine.
I started to panic. “Did my locker just magically disappear?” I could feel goose bumps forming as I heard the 1st bell ring and I had a bad feeling that this would not be good. I walked down any hallway I could see and franticly searched for my locker as if I lost my most precious possession. I had no luck. The 2nd bell rang and I still hadn’t found it.
I had never seen the halls so empty. They had gone from the streets of a boom town to a ghost town with the ring of a bell. I heard the echo of my footsteps walking through C Hall looking for a teacher. I finally found someone and said, “Do you know where my locker number is?” She told me she didn’t know much about lockers but she would find someone who does. I started to wonder if my locker broke off the wall and walked out of the school. When all hope seemed lost I heard, “ Is this it?”
I hurried to the location of the voice and sure enough on the top of the locker in black lettering I saw my locker number. I said thank you and entered my combination. As I heard the pop from opening my locker I felt a huge sigh of relief. I grabbed my supplies and was off like a jet.I was about to go into my 3rd hour class when I realized how late I was.
I was hoping she would give me a get out of trouble free card because it was the first day. I nervously walked in and was greeted with a smile. I told her what happened and she told me where to sit. Finally I was no longer lost and had this whole adventure behind me. As I reflected on the situation I learned that you should try to stay calm and ask for help if you are not sure of something.

5 comments:

  1. Great job! I love how much detail you went into like the part where you said "I had never seen the halls so empty. They had gone from the streets of a boom town to a ghost town with the ring of a bell."

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  2. Well you see Jason, in my story I was full of hot air from having a good day, and when I couldn't find my bus the hot air started to shoot out my feet thus causing me to hover. Then when i moved in a direction while hovering, I began to glide in the air.

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  3. So did you. Jason you didn't even sighn up so haha ha ha hahaha

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  4. I love all the great details and when you said "I had never seen the halls so empty. They had gone from the streets of a boom town to a ghost town with the ring of a bell." Keep up the great work =)

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  5. Way to make your point Jason. Will you REALLY stay calm next time? I like this blog. You capture the frantic disorientation of the first day well.... if you cleaned it up a little more (Like I'd instead of I had) the story might sound like you actually talk. I haven't seen anything more affective than reality when writing memoirs... But that's just my opinion.

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